my r1 http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll17/dinauskiz/r1001.jpg

To be honest i think that your cars look like traced artworks, and also you need to throw away that black marker you are using, or cut it down to make it a finer point.I believe that you need to stop pressing so hard with the colouring pencils and layer them instead. Shade softly and the more layers you add the darker it should get without it looking as rough as it does. Also i personal feeling comment, the choice of wheel colour is vulgar and i would like to know what you were thinking. Other than that the body has perfect form/shape and the lights are detailed enough for my liking.

I've always wanted to draw one of these since 2004. Oh wells, now I don't. Looks funky but the line work is fine.

ngati my line work is fine cause i know how to draw things i have just started to learn how to color them .. i will try to make layers as you said.

K thanks for clearing that up, i just wasn't sure :D

btw thanks for coments and tips:)