Hey People,
My latest sketch is of a Volkswagon Golf GTI. I did do some modifications to the bumper and rims. I did not yet finish the rims, and if some people can find some nice rims on the internet that I copy and draw, that would be appreciated. I think I over did myself and no matter what you people say, I still think this i my best picture. Telling me what to improve will help greatly, and if someone wants to say what colours for the car would be good.

Thank-You
http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/6969/golfys5.jpg
And as always
All comments welcome (as long as they follow the rules)

<Andrej>

I added the back rim.

Common people, where are the comments!!

i think it looks really good homie,, for the color i would go with like black or silver or something?

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/2776/golfgtihintstz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

It's a very nice drawing. You're getting better with each piece. There are only some minor issues:

Watch out for the left vanishing point. taking the bumper and the grille as a reference, the top windshield + roof lines are out of perspective. also, the wheels ellipses are opened too far.

The co drivers front wheel should be placed more outside, I guess. The track looks a bit narrow.

I hope you color this one, it's very nice!!

Thanks for the advice and diagram. It made my errors seem more clear.

- I've just added rims and they are the same as the rims on my honda civic that i did on the computer.
I will post a picture soon!

And I think i wil go with black and white etc.

Wery nice drawing dude ...!!
I really like the golf 2 gti in real life too ...
I have drew a golf too ..... it's somwhere in the forum

Thanks man!

Here is the edited and "rimmed" version.

http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/7360/golf2sb1.jpg

I hope you like it!
And I will colour it soon!

laydown some grid first then start draw boxes then add on the little things.

Yeah, that is a good idea...

What do you think about the rimmed version!

people, comment... I know you wannna!

look closer on the perspective on the rims. do they look right to you? take a picture of a rim and look at it from different perspective, so you can see how the rim looks like from different angle

Yeah, the back tire is off, the front is purpasly turned.

Looks pretty mean. Like you said, the back tire is a bit off, but pretty damn good anyways. Keep it gangsta.

Streight UP!

It looks good, kinda toony. It's great for a toony drawing, but if it's not, the perspective needs some touching. Overall it's great. Keep it up.

Also, think about drawing one perspective, two perspective drawings. There's always a VP so think about that while you draw.

think about drawing one perspective, two perspective drawings. There's always a VP so think about that while you draw.

Thanks for the comment but I dont get what you wanted to say in the quote above. And again, thanks for comming to this thread to help me out.

Here is my color starting to go on..
(note. that is scaner color, not lead)
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7403/golf3oh6.jpg

(i know there are some problems with the rear wheel, but its a fun project, and after adding the rims, i dont know if i should mess
with it. The perspective is a bit off, but then again, this in like my third car for this site to c&c. Please check back to this tread
to see if i made updates to the car. :) )

And can anyone help me with the reflections, (you see buildings and palm trees on the car (front and side windows) )