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here is my evo toon i need help,tips anything you have!!!!!

Happy Birthday!

The toon is very nice there's just one perspective thing I'd like to mention.
Note the lines from grill and upper and lower windshileld frame must all end in a vanishing point far in the right corner. Yours are parallel or even converge to the opposite direction.

I gotta try a toon aswell.

ya i hate toons because their that hard.. but besides the back and the wheels it looks normal.. oh and the size but so far it looks great!

thanks im going to do a new one now

that one is good but like knight vision said just get the perpestives wright
go over it with a fine liner and make the edges really stand out, dont be scared to be really exentric either remember its a toon so it whatever you make it really ! good luck !