My first Sketches

Nickee

07-23-2004, 05:09 AM

Hello these are my first cars....the bmw is colored in paintshop...
what do you think about the sketches?

http://anouk.altervista.org/bmw_ok2.jpg

http://anouk.altervista.org/rz2.jpg

Mshkttck

07-23-2004, 09:28 AM

Hmm... You've got some interesting concepts going on. I suggest that you work on drawing from real pictures first. I can understand that wavy cars like those are hard to draw realistically, but try to get your drawings to be more smooth and clean. Also, try to improve your proportions.

you

07-23-2004, 11:46 AM

PLeeeeeaaaaaaase make your pics smaller......

GTmike400

07-23-2004, 12:23 PM

Please resize your pictures.

SeCrEtMoDdEr

07-23-2004, 01:47 PM

you just threw everyone with 56k out the window...

not me though...cable...

hell yes.

make em smaller, it's hard to see and criticise it.

Ra_15

07-23-2004, 01:50 PM

The top one looks cool, but I had to resize my desktop just to see it. The bottom one looks a bit sketchy though. Proportions are pretty good.

Nickee

07-23-2004, 06:24 PM

I've resized...I hope that now goes well...

However...I know that I must work on proportion, but I'm a newbie and I've so many things to learn...

GoManGo

07-23-2004, 10:07 PM

Nickee!! I LOVE the orange BMW. I think that's some awesome design you've got going...do you mind if I take a little stab at it?

Nickee

07-24-2004, 04:14 AM

Take what you want (also if I don't know what mean STAB..)...is awesome for me :)

Ra_15

07-24-2004, 01:53 PM

Now that I can see all of it ;), I think the top one looks more like an Audi than a BMW, just MO.

thatoneguy88888

07-25-2004, 05:39 PM

uve got the main stuffs done...........but, u need work on the lil details that make the car look good.......and a lil work on the proportions

Jeep_Rubicon

07-26-2004, 03:06 PM

work on proportions and try and make ur sketch lines cleaner.

kennardo

07-28-2004, 04:50 AM

he didnt design that orange bmw he has traced over someone else's drawing which i have seen a couple of months ago... although he has changed a couple of minor things, does that really count?

Mshkttck

07-28-2004, 09:36 AM

he didnt design that orange bmw he has traced over someone else's drawing which i have seen a couple of months ago... although he has changed a couple of minor things, does that really count?

could you send us a link?

newdrawer

08-04-2004, 08:43 PM

My first "good" drawing was one on a Modded Celica see it at http://www.geocities.com/ndfspd123/CelicaSketch.html Say what you think about it.

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